We had to re write a paragraph from hoot but with a snowy scenery with with one simile five aspects of sensory adjective one onomatopoeia and one personified object.
It was a very cold night Roy felt surprised there was snow every were the wind pressed against Roy’s cheek. The wind howled as the snow fell it felt so good to be outside . The sun was out so it was bright but cold the coldest it had ever been here in Florida it was the first time in history that it had snowed in Florida. As Roy walked with his dad they talked about “comfortable subjects like school and sports and sports in school” quotes hoot. Swish the wind started rustling it was as strong as a gorilla and that is saying some thing. Roy felt the snow on his head it tasted like water.